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feather light illustration 1 by *evyheartway:iconevyheartway:

Categories Fan Art > Wallpaper > Books/Novels

©2009 *evyheartway
:iconevyheartway:

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an illustration to my little story "feather light"

background from japanstock:
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severus model : essence-stock

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Lilys' model sitara-leotaStock:

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now updated with Northangels' and scatharis' advices and helps, it looks better

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*northangel27 Apr 29, 2009, 4:41:32 AM
Because the light in your background is filtering through the trees, it gives it a greenish cast, and yet Sev and Lily have very different lighting on them. You might want to try a greenish filter. Also, blurring the edges of the figures helps blend them into the background a little more.

I love the setting of this, though. It's really lovely and magical.

--
"In the end only love matters...
It is love that brought the universe into being
and it is love that will transform it...
Love is the Alchemist of the soul."
:iconevyheartway:
*evyheartway Apr 29, 2009, 8:07:21 AM
thank you very much for your help !! I going to try to change the lighting on Lily and Sev and blur the edges

it's often my problem: a lot of ideas but bad technique and frustration to bring them to life
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*Scatharis Apr 29, 2009, 8:11:25 AM
I agree with northangel ( my big idol by using textures =D ), some trouble with the light...specially Severus is pretty much shadowed...

But what I really like is the glance Lily shows towards Severus, she really want´s to have a look into his face of if he´s relaxing himself enough to befree his mind...She really want´s to help him, to realize that challenge...:nod:

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:rudolph: *I eat art-thieves with Nutella :chew::santa:

*Stocking means - to NOT look into the camera*
:iconnorthangel27:
*northangel27 Apr 29, 2009, 8:25:11 AM
I know how that feels. If you have any questions just ask. I'm not an expert by any means (I'm pretty much self taught), but I do know a few things about Photoshop and will help if I can.

--
"In the end only love matters...
It is love that brought the universe into being
and it is love that will transform it...
Love is the Alchemist of the soul."
:iconevyheartway:
*evyheartway Apr 29, 2009, 11:06:09 AM
this is really kind of you, I truly appreciate :-)
:iconevyheartway:
*evyheartway Apr 29, 2009, 11:09:48 AM
yes the model is really adaquate, I was just browsing pictures, and when I saw...I was amazed that was exactly what I wanted..so lucky!!
:iconnorthangel27:
*northangel27 Apr 29, 2009, 11:47:06 AM
You are most welcome :-). Any time.

--
"In the end only love matters...
It is love that brought the universe into being
and it is love that will transform it...
Love is the Alchemist of the soul."
:iconscatharis:
*Scatharis Apr 29, 2009, 12:26:21 PM
Definately - a very interesting stock :eyepopping:

But - once again, - you did a really good job with, this is evident! :thumbsup:

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:rudolph: *I eat art-thieves with Nutella :chew::santa:

*Stocking means - to NOT look into the camera*
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